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title: "Paired editing"
url: "https://waterside-primary-school.schudio.com/blog/2023-12-07-10-45-00-paired-editing"
school: "Waterside Primary School"
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# Paired editing

  ![Image of Paired editing](https://files.schudio.com/waterside-primary-school/images/blog/34971194-6219-4975-9DE0-9FD1727D8FCF.jpeg)  7 December 2023

Year 6 spent some time editing their independent writes this week. The children had been writing a discursive argument whether animals should be used in the war. We decided that there were elements of our writes which we could improve upon, so we practiced our editing skills in pairs on Miss Cooke’s WABOLL firstly before independently editing our own work,

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